I’ll be honest, I was with this book for about the first three quarters of it. And then it lost me. Actually, I was really enjoying it, despite the typical YA love triangle and a nobody who becomes the last hope of civilization. It’s YA, I get it.
(Disclaimer: I LOVE young adult books, but there are those who happen to be coming of age stories but are mature and anyone could love and then there are those that are very specifically written for a teen audience. No judgement, but this is among the second kind.)
Don’t get me wrong, the book isn’t a total waste. I had originally chosen it for the gorgeous cover and that it’s among the few titles with a “Z” in it for Litsy A to Z. It also perfect fit Read Harder’s Task 12: Read a fantasy novel. I prefer science fiction over fantasy but this teeters in both so it was going to be a win. It almost was.
For starters, the world building is spectacular and I almost wish they would bring a world this well built to the big screen just so the graphic artists can play in it. I loved the way the cultures differed but were still based on the Zodiac the way that we have it now. I love the way the politics differed based on the cultures. I loved the way the Guardians form a sort of UN or something. Just spectacular.
I didn’t mind Rho or her insecurities. Everyone has insecurities and this was obviously going to be a series so she needed to start off in a way that gave her enough room to grow into the powerhouse that is always the endgame for these kinds of books. I didn’t mind Mathias and his brooding Edward-like qualities. Of all the Edwardesque characters I’ve seen over the years, he’s my favorite. Even over Edward himself. Yes, I’m refering to Twilight because it makes an easy comparison as most people are still familiar with it. And then there was Hysan, who I thought of as more of a Gale from the Hunger Games. He’s gorgeous and accessible and maybe hiding things but probably all wrong for some reason. They were decent characters but not as developed as some other books while not being entirely two dimensional either. Okay, they were close to two dimensional but they peaked into a third dimension that might come about in another book but this was told in the first person so perhaps it’s meant to be Rho’s point of view that restricts them. Given her title, I can see only anyone wanting to display only one dimension.
Then the plot. It’s a little thin and the villain isn’t exactly developed by the end but I also get that as an intentional part of the plot. It was in that last quarter though, that I would have thrown the book had it not been audio on my phone.
I don’t want to spoil what happens but it irritated me. I still finished because I was too far along and I thought that since so much of the story was so YA that maybe it was a fake out. I felt like it happened just to avoid an awkward or uncomfortable scene that otherwise had to happen. There had to be better ways to get where the author wanted to go. It felt almost lazy to handle it this way.
And then I thought, maybe it is a fake out of a greater magnitude. I realized that this was also not a good enough reason to stick with the series. If it was a longer fake out, I would just be more annoyed when it resolved. So I’m left with this feeling of so much potential and disappointment.
Again, this is a YA book that is actually directed at a YA audience, so maybe they haven’t read the umpteen million YA books that I have already and don’t feel like this story has been played out. Maybe they’ll love it anyway. I probably would have adored this book in my youth when love triangles didn’t make me want to gag. The world building is really of a calibur that far outdoes the rest of the book. Most of the plot plays out enjoyable enough to make it worth reading until that moment in the last quarter that pissed me right off. It was going to be a solid three stars until that point. If you look over my rating scale, 3 stars are respectable here. They are still great books. 2 stars aren’t common here but it’s not entirely bad either. I was just really tweaked by that thing at the end. Maybe some of you will like that about it, but it’s about to keep me from finishing the series.